STAGE 2

A new year, a new stage. To start with, here is a copy of my feedback from stage one:

Good in depth analysis of future technology and being able to articulate these findings to your final outcome. Need to identify what you are communicating in stage 2 and to test these results before moving onto the final stage. Need to spend some time developing your visual style for your graphic novel. But also, need to analyse the structure and narrative of your ideas. How would you gauge from the audience how believable your ideas are. Needs to be more critical with your work - analyses. How can one test the future? Test the communication value rather than the technology perhaps? Develop your design questions more. Need to explore your own approach to illustrating your ideas. Find a different question for the future. research more on comic design/illustration, the target audience, the market, etc.